Tall, monstrous waves crash upon the shore and I am walking, with shoes in hand, the warm sand in between my toes. My mind is empty no worries, no thoughts, no nothing. I lay down and the water gently washes over my body, the next time pulling me in. I am in the ocean, staring at the beauty that surrounds me. How could one be so lucky.
Taylor,
ReplyDeleteThis was a really cool piece. It was really calm and serene. Next time continue it.
-Karen
I like how you say: My mind is empty no worries, no thoughts, no nothing.", it makes the beach sound so peaceful and real. Maybe next time you could have it go on a little longer. Keep it up!
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