Monday, September 14, 2009

A Jury of Her Peers

In the short story, A Jury of Her Peers, Susan Glaspell displays the outcome of a "prisoned marriage" and how women were not treated fairly. While searching for clues, it appeared as though the women and men were working separately and that the men believed all the clues the women found were of no use. The women had no rights and they were just there because of their husbands. The separation of the men and women symbolizes the rise of women gaining rights and becoming less dependent on the men. The conclusion to the mystery of Mr. Wright's death was that it was his own wife who was to blame. Mr. Wright was the kind of husband who thought he was more powerful than Mrs. Wright and would take advantage of her -- knowing she could do nothing to him -- this being an example of a "prisoned marriage." Mrs. Wright owned a singing canary; it was what kept her going, it was the only light in her life. When Mr. Wright got annoyed with this small yellow bird he decided to go against his wife's will and hanged the innocent creature. A canary represents freedom and intelligence. When this was taken away from Mrs. Wright she acted in a non-intelligent manner-- she hanged her husband. Because the canary was dead, Mrs. Wright was drowned of all the light in her life, which caused her to go insane. Although there was a gun in the house, she wanted to have her husband suffer a long painful death just as she will suffer a long painful life without the canary.

5 comments:

  1. good how you used examples and focused on the main part. I do not understand how she would want her husband to suffer so much? overall really nice

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  2. I loved the term "prisoned marriage", it fit really well in your response. And the way you said "just as she will suffer a long painful life without the canary." was a very well written comment. I didn't really think of that when I read the story. Maybe next time you could make your sentences flow from one to the other more smoothly but I thought your vocabulary was really good. You're an amazing friend and I think your writing is amazing.:] ILY!!

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  3. You used very good text evidence to support your ideas. I also really like how you said the bird was hervonly light in her life. Honestly, I don't think there was anything bad about this paragraph.

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  4. I think you used awesome text evidence. I wasn't too much summary but it wasn't too much of text evidence. I can't think of anything that was bad about this paragraph! Great job!

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  5. I like how yours wasn't like most of the other reactions, in that it wasn't just about how her husband strangled her canary so she strangled him. It did seem a little all over the place though. Maybe if you focused on one topic it would be better.

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